Good its okay not bsd describe the characters please make it more eyecatching and satisfying, the mermaid is ummmm....-_+ so i cant describe but please the Story is good to read improve to catch attention, i hope the author is reading this and would appreciate my review, dont mind it complaibs leads to improvement!! See you author and i am looking forward gor improvement and Exciting chapters
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