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A good story that made me interested though the downside of it is how the author's uses his/her pronoun which needed improvement and a bit to his/her verb... if he can improve of these two then even of there is always wrong grammars the readers won't be confused of the flow of the story and could be understandable at least a bit and not skipping some paragraphs... P.S. I don't mean to offend someone but I really do like the story... yet there are some things I could not understand because of the two I mentioned above. Right, I do have some question though... is the MC a half breed or what? This confuses me because she says she came from a forgotten race and calls herself a vampire then dragon another time. What is the connection of these two? Because nomatter how I see it Vampire and Dragon are two different race and not one so... is LW a halfbreed that has a blood of a Vampire and a Dragon?

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