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Item: blood is life
Rating: 3.8

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ian3373Lv55yrian3373

This novel has potential to be a very good one... but ruined by severely lack of proofread... And the author seems don't care about the pronouns... he/she, her/him, her/his, are all mixed up badly... That's why I rated 2-star on Writing Quality.... Please fix it..it's only on early chapters.. I hope it gets better

blood is life

VladDraculMichael

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VladDraculMichaelAuthorVladDraculMichael

Thanks you, I'll solve it over time, what happens is that you do not speak English very well.

5yr

ian3373Lv5ian3373

I suggest that you write in your own language.. don't write in english... than find someone to translate it to english.. I think it will have a better result...

VladDraculMichael:Thanks you, I'll solve it over time, what happens is that you do not speak English very well.

5yr

VladDraculMichaelAuthorVladDraculMichael

thanks, I will do the best I can

ian3373:I suggest that you write in your own language.. don't write in english... than find someone to translate it to english.. I think it will have a better result...

5yr