I didn't try the second chapter, I can't say if the story is good or bad, I'm posting this review to get more intel. Will the writing quality get better as the story progress ? The first chapter was painful to read.
Ak02
Liked it!
LIKEIf you are expecting master-level writing in the original section, you are going to be disappointed, buddy. Most of the authors, like myself, writing novels to improve our English skills and we are not native English speakers. So, it will take time for us to improve our English. Although there are a few good original novels with good grammar in the original section, it is still rare on this website. I already mentioned in the review that I'm writing this novel mainly to improve my English skills. I can tell that my grammar is not good, but it is enough for normal readers to understand the story.