Review Detail of NoNameJustFame in Immaculate Spirit

super well written novel. I enjoyed reading it until he got to college ....and thats when the plot got kinda strange... however my advice to the author is to make the main character more consistent (which would improve the progression of the plot significantly). Your MC dabbles in too many things and then abandons them, and he is a little too perfect. Plus there are some major plotholes pushing the plot just to show off the MC's perfect skills and Gary-Stuness. Take the time to develop his decision making and the thinking that goes into his actions. After reading for awhile i found the MC behaving like a drastically different person every chapter as if he has a split personality disorder. Please to slow down and justify the MC's actions, things happen too fast and for no reason other than his justice-boner. Let the MC enjoy his newfound freedom, I don't understand why you would make him basically return to his old profession when he has limitless potential. Overall this is down to a matter of taste, but to other readers i really do recommend you read this novel as it is significantly better than most novels you find on this site and has plot elements for everyone.