Review Detail of Sivil in Immaculate Spirit

This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc... It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.