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Review Detail of Hakkira in Immaculate Spirit

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Hakkira
HakkiraLv144yrHakkira

To be honest I almost dropped this in the beginning as the grammar was quite grating but I kept reading which I am now glad for as the story got better and after getting some editing help I could enjoy the story much more. Light hearted feel good story with dashes of action and intrigue. Stay up all night reading it all in one go ☺ definitely recommend a read!

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Immaculate Spirit

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Adanne_onwuka
Adanne_onwukaLv10Adanne_onwuka

Thank you I was going to drop this story till I saw this review 😊

solakin
solakinLv14solakin

about what chapter does it get better?

Hakkira
HakkiraLv14Hakkira

It varies on quality with some highs and sadly many lows grammer wise 🤔

solakin:about what chapter does it get better?