Review Detail of DaDegen08 in Immaculate Spirit
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This novel is so underrated. The start was rough but not enough to make readers leave even though there is some wording mistake that is very big. This novel looks like Jay Aslan but had a different feels and pace. If the start was smooth i bet it'll top the shadow of the genre.. If you're a reader who enjoys fics like Jay Aslan, Logan Williams, Choice System and Juvenile Entertainer then this is a very big hidden gem for you. Don't let the sypnosis fool you!
Immaculate Spirit
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*As i said a couple of times *Corrected *Appreciate Your english had a few big mistakes but not that BAD. Theres other author that have worse english than yours that have their novel ranked in the top 100-200. Some mistake can be fixed if you have an editor or you'll double checked/review the chapter yourself. Your storytelling is good thats why the bad became that big. Other than these big mistakes theres only minor ones that involves words/sentences. I would rank your novel at tank 200s but since there are other that have worse english than this, i would place this at the 100s or possibly top 100. I cant wait for the next chapter haha
Newbiel:Hi there. As I said it a couple of times, English is not my first language so I do make some mistakes. You were right, there was some big mistakes in the first few chapters. I correct the most ugly one and even modified some phrase to look better. Thanks for your comment. Really apprecied it!