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Review Detail of AbsoluteCarnage in Overlord - Of Sin and Sanctity (Discontinued)

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AbsoluteCarnage
AbsoluteCarnageLv135yrAbsoluteCarnage

Best fan fiction about overlord so far. I just want to read more. Things I dislike : Dabilosi does not live Up to being a " supreme being " . Xygat should be with his creator. Things I like : Dabilosi properly puts lesser beings in their place. This is a well written fan fiction. To the Author thanks for everything so far. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest.

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Overlord - Of Sin and Sanctity (Discontinued)

Thousandragons

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Thousandragons
ThousandragonsAuthorThousandragons

It makes me glad to know that I managed to come across that well, and I'm very grateful for the review. One request, could you please expand on 'does not live up to being a supreme being'? I'd just like to know so that in the future I may be able to correct it.

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AbsoluteCarnage
AbsoluteCarnageLv13AbsoluteCarnage

Too elaborate on the mc, he doesn't get treated enough respect from the denizens of Nazarick as if he was another floor guardian.

5yr
Thousandragons
ThousandragonsAuthorThousandragons

Mmk. So you think he needs to have more interactions, both direct and indirect, with the lower levels of Nazarick to further assert the fact that he 'lives up to being a supreme being'? I should be able to fit that in if that is what you are thinking of. Also, sort out that they aren't respectful enough. Already sort of thought about that but nice to get confirmation.

AbsoluteCarnage:Too elaborate on the mc, he doesn't get treated enough respect from the denizens of Nazarick as if he was another floor guardian.
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