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Enlightened_Being
Enlightened_BeingLv66yr
2019-02-26 00:46

very bad character design, everything is like a joke, the MC is very stupid and piss all over everything and doesn't know how to behave or take care of himself like a baby being led by nose by everyone with a candy, first Batman has to babysit him and then Deadpool and SHIELD and so on, talk about destiny the most powerful superhero become someone lacky and an intern SHIELD member, disappointment after disappointment, the funniest part is being captured by Black Widow, a God got capture by a mortal.

A Hero's Multiverse

Zibarn
3.9
64 Chs

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Zibarn
ZibarnAuthor

Thanks for your honest opinion, but you are a bit unfair regarding the MC... Yes lets himself get caught by Black Widow, but who wouldn't. Also, never seen Man of Steel? Same situation... Also, he grew up under Bruce Wayne since he was 5. You are right that he was babysitting because he was a fucking baby. Also, when you are in a new environment try to be sneaky and smart as Batmen (who most often only survives because of knowledge).

6yr
GhostyGodZ
GhostyGodZLv5

He gets capture by Black Widow wtf lol.

6yr
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VictoriousFighting
VictoriousFightingLv4

Thanks men, you save my day. I actually want to read this novel but from what i read in your comment, the MC is a god without a power to write his own life and that would be my worst nightmares. Well, i will read it for a few chapter just that i really will not hope too much for this one (i've seen something like this, may or may not be more worst. The name is The Invincible Talisman or whatever is that, i just dislike the MC for told everyone his most thing that should be a secret. And about the author promised to change his personality yet never happened even after traveled to Dragon Ball World. Well, that's my opinion and i believe that everyone have different opinion.) Not that i disregarding the author, just that this type of Novel is definitely not fit for me.

6yr
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Im_Sweepy
Im_SweepyLv4

2nd review. I just wanted to add that this novel is very sloppily done. The storyline is hard to follow, the grammar is somewhat readable but honestly, I could barely follow the story. I honestly don't think the author proofreads his chapters before publishing them. The story itself could of had a lot of potential like most fanfics do but the author's execution caused it to fail. There are many positive feedbacks so I assume I'm being too picky but I honestly don't recommend reading this unless you're looking for a novel that is done half-assed and will probably be dropped if the author doesn't start improving his quality of writing.

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CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
DJason
DJasonLv15

Eh writing quality. Stability is good SO FAR. Story development, actual garbage. What is even happening? Character design? Good! Only for deadpool tho :D World background, horrible integrated into this multiverse.

6yr
WorthlessDaoist
WorthlessDaoistLv4

Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't drop this! Don't Don't drop this! this! Fucking Harem

6yr
MrPassionate
MrPassionateLv3

There are too many flaws in the story and writing. Dropped.🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

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AJXSJS
AJXSJSLv4

I haven't read this but I see Supergirl and Powergirl in the picture does he hook up with them? Yes I realise what that would mean but, Powergirl seems worth it. Also why is it that I hate Superman but I'm fine if not an outright fan of everyone else in his bloodline?

6yr
Inmortal_Dog
Inmortal_DogLv5

One Word for your novel, Bull****, so bull****. I'am sorry author, but your novel is a bull****. The mc is a idiot and and if it's because he has a script, I do not even notice it, the story can follow the mc would not matter in the most.

6yr
CliffkunLolRekt
CliffkunLolRektLv6

So fucking good more plssss and by the cover its going to be a harem fuuuuggggg yyaaa Serously man 3 chaps and I’m already hooked I want more lol you deserve the 5 stars

6yr
TheGrimSeeker
TheGrimSeekerLv7

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