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Im_Sweepy
Im_SweepyLv45yr
2019-02-21 15:12

2nd review. I just wanted to add that this novel is very sloppily done. The storyline is hard to follow, the grammar is somewhat readable but honestly, I could barely follow the story. I honestly don't think the author proofreads his chapters before publishing them. The story itself could of had a lot of potential like most fanfics do but the author's execution caused it to fail. There are many positive feedbacks so I assume I'm being too picky but I honestly don't recommend reading this unless you're looking for a novel that is done half-assed and will probably be dropped if the author doesn't start improving his quality of writing.

A Hero's Multiverse

Zibarn
3.9
64 Chs

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Zibarn
ZibarnAuthor

Thanks for your honest opinion, but why write two reviews? Do you want to lower the novels rating that bad?

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Im_Sweepy
Im_SweepyLv4

Deleted the first review.

Zibarn:Thanks for your honest opinion, but why write two reviews? Do you want to lower the novels rating that bad?
5yr
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Zibarn
ZibarnAuthor

Thank you.🤗

Im_Sweepy:Deleted the first review.
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