Review Detail of RedClearfield in WH40k - Tyranid Project

This is a beginning of a good story that i had hoped to see more with the Zerg from Starcraft 2. With the Prologue i have some problems I dont think a lord Captain or lord High Captain has security clearance of rear Admiral has ship that is faster than light, can Orbital Bombard a hive City(!!!!) before they can activate there void shields and command the Imperial Guard. The biomass convergence is a little wacki a dozen tree, two birds, 8 stone insects for tail and two more eyes? If dont drop the story like 95 percent of the other writers of similare storys then you will have my power stone.