RWBY! RWBY! RWBY! This is AWESOME! 😊😊😊😊😊 Absolutely love this fanfic! Please continue! RWBY! RWBY! RWBY! 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍

The story is great so far! The intervention of the OC has change major parts of our lady MC major personality but she is still caring and lovin! Currently she is more powerful then the show version and that should be a blessing due to how bad Remmeant get to! The novel is back after its Hiatus and thank you Author for the return! I found this novel a bit late but as soon as I saw and update I made the review!

you make very interesting stories and I like how you make Them

I love nearly everything about this story but puking guy collecting Girls left and right is not for me. They always use him in fanfics and I am sick of it. He is Just nobody. He represents common folk in the anime but I dont think common folk can Just collect Girls. And is the Main character Ruby or her dad? Even so, jaune is not a Main character in this story.

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will you ever continue this story????........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

So yeaaah. A good idea for a RWBY fanfic👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Dud how the hack did you came up with such a great idea. An immortal adopting RWBY. That is really smart really really smart.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😣😣😣😣😣😣😣😇

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