Bad grammar, cant sau anything about stability of updating because i gave up on the first chapter so i will give full stars, story dev. is a mehh, charater is good and world is good. Overall, pls improve on the grammar, its a major point when writing anything, even if you are not native english speaker surely you could do this better if you just write the chapters in word and copy them to webnovel.
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