Except for the fact that i personally hate wishy washy, idiotically good, terminally *****, hatefully whipped, and heroically dense MCs. The technical aspects of a story is overall perfect. This is a damn good 10/10, a 100/100 novel. Keep it up!
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Why do you have to be so mean to Shirou like that? People like you saying something like that is the reason the world has no more selflessness person out there like Shirou. Yes he is dense but not that dense like higher. In fact he knows a thing or two if the girl likes him beyond friendship. But it just him not yet ready or to faced that quickly. If you watched Fate/stay night UBW, the Shirou in there confessed his feelings to Rin and they dated for years after the Fifth Holy Grail War before Shirou take his path of Archer.
Sorry about that, its just a personal thing i have about too much selflessness, you know "experience" thats why i admittedly have a prejudice against it. And yes i totally love Fate: Unlimited Blade Works.
That is exactly Shirou is. He can never change his unwilling selflessness. I don't care what others thought of him. He's a real hero that willing to everything for everyone sake. And you know the time traveling arc where he was in the Underworld civil war past. That is the most mind blowing composed plot I've ever read. Surely no fanfic could do this level of literacy settings. The heavy weight that Shirou burdened just for the sake even if they are Devils. Towards the tipping point of his supposed death that change someone's fate to this anime magical girl who has such history. Man I'm moved to tears about that last panel. Shirou indeed become somewhat a legend, a hero in the past of the Underworld. He's enough to become a heroic god much more so than a heroic spirit.
this website censors some weird words. and not even seriously censors like you can just uppercase the whole word and it's okay
Yeah its totally weird, that some common words are being censored, like what is even the ground or reason behind the censoring.
