it's a very well written well thought out story with great progression and no stupid plot twist just thrown in for the heck of it(ex. one of the MC's close companions surrenders to the enemy when their personality would have them fight to the death)

I'll be honest here, this fanfic was the best dxd fanfic in my opinion...although shirou's hero complex in the early story was annoying, it will improve in the future story... The story genre was hare., however the girls personalities was keep consistent and not one dimensional... Give it a try until at least chapter 20, if you like it you will hooked, if you dont like it, well, each of their own preferances

Are you the original Author of the book because i read this in fanficion.com. .

Except for the fact that i personally hate wishy washy, idiotically good, terminally *****, hatefully whipped, and heroically dense MCs. The technical aspects of a story is overall perfect. This is a damn good 10/10, a 100/100 novel. Keep it up!

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And this is a solid 10/10. The story is really good. There are some time line problems but it could just be ignored. I just wish for more updates. Also for vasto of white an hunts man of red.

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nice