Review Detail of Sigheti in FORBIDDEN LOVE- A PILE OF PAST MISTAKES.

I’m going to be honest and say I’m confident this story has potential, however... I would like to advise you to write longer chapters and take your time with them. It wouldn’t hurt to check your spelling and grammatical quality after you write something. I had often trouble reading your story due to these easily avoidable mistakes. As a reader, I get the impression - my sincere apologies if this isn’t the case - that you finish writing after ten minutes and post it without checking for style or mistakes. Don’t worry though, I enjoyed the overall storyline and the way it’s developing. Keep writing in order to improve and I’m sure you’ll have a lot of regular readers in no time. I understand the struggle of the pointers I’ve given, as I‘m new to writing myself. I hope you have a lot of fun working on your book, keep going!