Pretty good read. Overall writing quality is not bad, I’d love it if the chapters were longer though. Still would recommend if you’re looking for something shorter to read.

I’m going to be honest and say I’m confident this story has potential, however... I would like to advise you to write longer chapters and take your time with them. It wouldn’t hurt to check your spelling and grammatical quality after you write something. I had often trouble reading your story due to these easily avoidable mistakes. As a reader, I get the impression - my sincere apologies if this isn’t the case - that you finish writing after ten minutes and post it without checking for style or mistakes. Don’t worry though, I enjoyed the overall storyline and the way it’s developing. Keep writing in order to improve and I’m sure you’ll have a lot of regular readers in no time. I understand the struggle of the pointers I’ve given, as I‘m new to writing myself. I hope you have a lot of fun working on your book, keep going!

The novel has potential. Writing Quality: I gave it a 3* because my eyes hurt. The grammar is adequate but Author has problems with typing with Caps lock on or is unable to have proper punctuations when the Caps are not used. If it doesn't bother you, then it's fine but for me, my brain just shuts down a bit when the whole chapter is all in caps or there are no capital letters at all. Also, I find the chapters to be too short. Extremely short. It's like reading one or two paragraphs with no real context before the next chapter. I would advice Author to have about 900 words at least? It would allow you to develop the characters more, and also not frustrate your readers who may be waiting for an update - only to get a paragraph or two without anything new. Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but I gave it a 5* in good faith. Story Development: 4* - It's getting there. The slow romance is not a problem or how it develops is not a problem. I can't really comment on Character Design or World Background even though I've read until Chapter 38 before doing the review. I normally read about 10 - 20 chapters to get a feel. However, since the chapters here were really short, not much progress or insight to the characters could really be seen even at this point. Still, I gave it a 4* for the potential it has. It is best if you look through your chapters before posting it. Sometimes, re-reading what you wrote can give you more inspiration besides spotting mistakes. All the best, Author.

This book is like a red paper crane among a hoarde of white paper boats. Different, amusing and controversial. It's different from all novels out there. More hilarious than usual romcom novels, and controversial cause I certainly can't tell where the plot's gonna take me and contradicts my guesses. Author-san, the only thing I'm sad about is that you sometimes write in caps and the other times in small. Also, the punctuation marks aren't on spot. Initially I was irritated about the short chapters, but later, it actually didn't bother me. All the best author-san! Keep up the good work! Also, don't take my words to heart. I'm just giving some suggestions. P.S: You should get an editor to edit your works. Sometimes, another person's pov can change many things. That's it. ♥ ♥ ♥

I like the cover and I can tell it will be a wonderful story. ************"***"""*""*here are my stars I hope this novel can really make me glad

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Its nice story.only getting better.I like the way this novel is different from others.I'm tired of CEO love. Now the male lead is not one and is cold but however I like this book and I hope you guys do too and just like me you can encourage her because the author is female .by writing a review or commencing

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