Review Detail of TycKa in A Gun-Slinging Soul-Reaper (A Bleach Fan-fiction)

Yep, this one is real author because I have read same story on fanfiction. And so far it's amazing, really can't find much fouls in it. Well maybe ichigo still to much clinging to his friends, something little happens to them and he loses his level head. And well he's still bit to *****, his inner world screams only one word 'suspicious af' but he isn't investigating it on his own and rely on his zampakto to do all explaining. Hope that will change with time.