I personally like the story. Who doesn’t love gender-bender with male becoming female and getting love interest from male counterpart. No OP-much MC, just a steady progressive strengthening for beloved MC which author can definitely lengthen the story while not making it too shabby or boringly.
Vermillion_Yormsky
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LIKESexual? Not yet (and maybe never....), but there are a few questionable moments that I can categorize as "fan service." I rated it 17 as I planned to have pretty disturbing scenes (things like gore, acts of genuine evil, and of course... potentially some smut scenes). I've already written through one of those disturbing scenes, but the reception I got was that it wasn't worthy of the ***** rating. The story's still in its infancy so there'll probably still be many chances to include details deserving of the rating~
Wafflezz:Is there anything sexual in it? I hope not. Why is it rated 17?
Honestly? I wouldn't be surprised of the number who disliked it outnumber those who did by at least a factor of ten. Not to say I dislike it, more like I am indifferent to it. I think it shouldn't really matter whether they were Male or Female turned into the opposite. Think of it this way; Many Cat-girls(I am not saying all of them) actually start as a cat before magically transforming into a human-like form and a lot more people seem to be okay with that. That is literally beastiality if you lewd her. Not cool to think about anymore, is it? Realistically speaking, the only reason people are okay with it is because it is so far from reality most don't even think about it. Now, a Male turning Female? That actually happens and considering it is a fairly new concept social norms haven't fully caught up yet, if they ever will. Good information to contemplate if you ever feel philosophical.
Vermillion_Yormsky:Sexual? Not yet (and maybe never....), but there are a few questionable moments that I can categorize as "fan service." I rated it 17 as I planned to have pretty disturbing scenes (things like gore, acts of genuine evil, and of course... potentially some smut scenes). I've already written through one of those disturbing scenes, but the reception I got was that it wasn't worthy of the ***** rating. The story's still in its infancy so there'll probably still be many chances to include details deserving of the rating~
Um... yes? There's something like that already written but its more like fanservice than romance. For romance, I'm not sure if I'll go the yuri route yet~
Space_Fox:Is there yuri? :D
If the guy was gay before he became a chick it would be fine if he/she wants to date men with a new female body, Not my thing but it's fine. The problem is when his sexual preference somehow gets twisted because of his new body. That's like saying women can only like men, since only the body switched, unless he already had homosexual preferences he should still like women.
True_Equality:Honestly? I wouldn't be surprised of the number who disliked it outnumber those who did by at least a factor of ten. Not to say I dislike it, more like I am indifferent to it. I think it shouldn't really matter whether they were Male or Female turned into the opposite. Think of it this way; Many Cat-girls(I am not saying all of them) actually start as a cat before magically transforming into a human-like form and a lot more people seem to be okay with that. That is literally beastiality if you lewd her. Not cool to think about anymore, is it? Realistically speaking, the only reason people are okay with it is because it is so far from reality most don't even think about it. Now, a Male turning Female? That actually happens and considering it is a fairly new concept social norms haven't fully caught up yet, if they ever will. Good information to contemplate if you ever feel philosophical.
Isaac_Adrenyi:I mean I'm okay with MC looking female (as it is amusing and I like it I guess..)but. I need a "full male" protagonist I might add feminine protagonist as I don't mind with. It's just that it's no fun reading with female MC