Review Detail of linqin77 in New Life : A Second Chance
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(I will start with the positive critics before the negative ones. 😉) No lie, at the beginning of this novel I was like "this is gonna be a drag 😫" but I'm glad I didn't drop it. It didn't take me long to be hooked. Reading this novel has made me realise that I have overrated *a lot* of novels. I am amazed how the writer mixed many controversial ideas into this...and make it a bomb without making everything jumbled up or confusing. Like how? I couldn't drop my phone after I began reading this novel. I would not be surprised if he was a professional writer. Psychological comedy drama romance revenge rebirth action undercover mystery .... The theme list goes on and on. The diversity not only lied in the themes but also the culture, depicted in the plot and setting...it has been well joined no gaps at all. Most novels on this platform are kind of predictable when it came to the romance, but here, all my guesses kept on being shut down and unlike the others, the romance is so sweet sexy and pure at the same time. I have been amazed There is no overlap in the characters which is quite common, since it is difficult to create and present completely different personas when writing. It's easy to mix them up or end up loosing the depth of the character. But surprisingly the writer pulled it off! The novel is no lie a great one it has potential to be best selling, as in yes it can enter the market...and I would buy it! It has potential to even be produced into series or anime without doubt. But there is room for improvement. For example, the "warnings" about the content having possible violence or sexual content destroys the flow of the novel. Like am enjoying the book, am so into it and then boom these sentences that are not even part of the story jump out of my face like what on earth? I suggest they use icons on the chapters themselves to warn readers and possible mature content so we don't have to waste..er I mean delay our interaction with the characters. Like I came across a whole paragraph *during* the *climax* of the story warning me about possible mature content! 😠 like did you have to use half of my screen with something you can use a symbol for? And please make Kyle bisexual 🙈 Hehehe
New Life : A Second Chance
PsyberRose
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Aaaaa! I'm utterly speechless. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. (*/▽＼*) Noted on the 'warnings' bit. I was worried cuz I found out there are some young readers and some who are a bit averse to such scenes. From now on, I'll just have the warnings in the Author's Note, and then put a [R18] label on the title - leave the chapter alone from any more warnings so you don't waste ... er, delay your interaction with the characters. hee hee And yes, Kyle is bisexual. (*⸰‿-)
You are the best! 🤗 I will be looking for the eye "Kyle-Candy" Hehehe 😋 keep it up... My heart is relying on you now From your little fan 🐾
PsyberRose:Aaaaa! I'm utterly speechless. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. (*/▽＼*) Noted on the 'warnings' bit. I was worried cuz I found out there are some young readers and some who are a bit averse to such scenes. From now on, I'll just have the warnings in the Author's Note, and then put a [R18] label on the title - leave the chapter alone from any more warnings so you don't waste ... er, delay your interaction with the characters. hee hee And yes, Kyle is bisexual. (*⸰‿-)
You are the best! 🤗 I will be looking for the eye "Kyle-Candy" Hehehe 😋 keep it up... My heart is relying on you now From your little fan 🐾
PsyberRose:Aaaaa! I'm utterly speechless. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. (*/▽＼*) Noted on the 'warnings' bit. I was worried cuz I found out there are some young readers and some who are a bit averse to such scenes. From now on, I'll just have the warnings in the Author's Note, and then put a [R18] label on the title - leave the chapter alone from any more warnings so you don't waste ... er, delay your interaction with the characters. hee hee And yes, Kyle is bisexual. (*⸰‿-)
Eliza_Belle_Gray:I wish I have you brain and hands because I wanted to write this long too...XD
linqin77:😂😂I think I just got overexcited...but thanks... I'm sure you can also 😉
Oh, I love your review! 💖💖💖 If you have time, please please please... review my novel as well. As a beginner novelist, I really wish to get some constructive feedback. 😉👍 Note: I have two novels... My first one is 1000+ chapters and is premium, but first 120 chapters are free. (That is enough to get the idea about the storyline... Maybe...) My second novel has a better start (IMO), and it's relatively fresh...
RedSonia:Oh, I love your review! 💖💖💖 If you have time, please please please... review my novel as well. As a beginner novelist, I really wish to get some constructive feedback. 😉👍 Note: I have two novels... My first one is 1000+ chapters and is premium, but first 120 chapters are free. (That is enough to get the idea about the storyline... Maybe...) My second novel has a better start (IMO), and it's relatively fresh...
Reading what i see its good blaw blaw chick turn to boy possible adventure feels like another slime or spider series that are out🤣 i think ill pass im a fan of dark fantasy genres system romance adventure gore rated R i like a part mc flips out an finds out his her worth an how to pass it a destroy all the barriers in there way kinda like deadpool killing the writers from killing him 🤩 i may try the book if it tickles my fancy 1 day
I am not into yaoi content, may i ask if there are scenes/chapters of it? Because if there is then....... idk if i can read it.
PsyberRose:Aaaaa! I'm utterly speechless. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. (*/▽＼*) Noted on the 'warnings' bit. I was worried cuz I found out there are some young readers and some who are a bit averse to such scenes. From now on, I'll just have the warnings in the Author's Note, and then put a [R18] label on the title - leave the chapter alone from any more warnings so you don't waste ... er, delay your interaction with the characters. hee hee And yes, Kyle is bisexual. (*⸰‿-)
Yes, but you can skip them. Each chapter that has it would have a warning label and skipping it won't have you be lost in the story or plot. It occurs in the later volumes.
Axes:I am not into yaoi content, may i ask if there are scenes/chapters of it? Because if there is then....... idk if i can read it.