Review Detail of Vyte in Doomsday Pillars

I cant be bothered to read anymore. The plot has promise and potential, but the writing quality seemed to dip after the first few chapters and the grammar is now low quality and super unprofessional. You probably hired and editor for the first few chapters or just got lazy with editing, so please hire an editor to fix all your really unprofessional writing. A good example is the ending of chapter 15 "Alex panicked... (noooo... my Evoooo...)" That's way too many ellipses in one line and the (noooo... my Evoooo...) part is super weird and unprofessional.