Review Detail of RenuKakkar in Glory Seeker

I have read 7 chapters from the 17 posted so far. The story is developing nicely. The characters are well designed. World background is well defined too. Some issues about grammar but those do not interfere with the story. I would suggest use grammarly - the free grammar checker. I have started using it and will run all my chapters through it. After all the writer cannot see his own mistakes but others can. Keep up the good work. All the best.