Item: The Soldier Mage
Rating: 2.4
Author: GuDaoistBigbro

GuDaoistBigbroLv146yr

2019-03-20 20:12

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The Soldier Mage

Alteru

4.1

35 Chs

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LazarethLv4

I don't think the mc is retarded.

6yr

GuDaoistBigbroLv14

Stupid at the least but hes at the age of 8 so i wouldnt mind. But kids a 30 year old dude that cant think. Doesnt even fcking atleast know that his skill stands for as a modern man. Leaves a potentially dangerous falsed god weapon on someones else property thinking itd ve safe against a magic like world. Yeh yeh, dudes young body mightve effected him but even my son knows that littering causes a fcking hazard.

Lazareth:I don't think the mc is retarded.

6yr

GuDaoistBigbroLv14

Mc that fails to function as what he was supposed to be. 30 year old dude that has war experiences...pls. he got trampled on, no awareness, no retailation gg

Lazareth:I don't think the mc is retarded.

6yr

LazarethLv4

You have a point. The fact that he is 30 in mind changes everything. But I'd like to see it as the mc is just not perfect and has things to learn. Because it's a novel people assume all characters must be perfect: making perfect decisions. But authors are writing about humans and humans aren't perfect.

GuDaoistBigbro:Mc that fails to function as what he was supposed to be. 30 year old dude that has war experiences...pls. he got trampled on, no awareness, no retailation gg

6yr

LazarethLv4

So I'd like to give it time to see growth. But if he remains as ignorant as ever, then I'll drop it. I like my characters imperfect as it makes them more relatable in a sense. But I respect your views and understand where you are coming from.

GuDaoistBigbro:Stupid at the least but hes at the age of 8 so i wouldnt mind. But kids a 30 year old dude that cant think. Doesnt even fcking atleast know that his skill stands for as a modern man. Leaves a potentially dangerous falsed god weapon on someones else property thinking itd ve safe against a magic like world. Yeh yeh, dudes young body mightve effected him but even my son knows that littering causes a fcking hazard.

6yr

GuDaoistBigbroLv14

No problemo, Its just frustrating to see dude gets wrekt by a non experience combatant teenager, cause of his thinking that hes safe cause ->headmaster. Plus he made a stupid mistake to think hiding **** in a magic world without even thinking atleast what magic be used for. Even I know magic could either be used to make life easier by via search spell, cleaning, healing, etc or offensive plus defensive spell. Hes shouldve fcking learned of what modern weapons could do. Look at our history, billions of life are taken, families that are broken apart since the introduction of guns. I wouldnt mention pollution cause with magic that **** aint happening.

Lazareth:So I'd like to give it time to see growth. But if he remains as ignorant as ever, then I'll drop it. I like my characters imperfect as it makes them more relatable in a sense. But I respect your views and understand where you are coming from.

6yr

Other Reviews

KerailLv12

Reveal spoiler

6yr

Lv3

The story seems ok although a bit of editing and character development is needed. The abilities are interesting with the setting; however, there does need to be a bit more realism in parts particularly of the maturity and slip-ups of the protagonist. The fluctuation between intelligence and maturity to a sudden childlike actions needs to be explained or changed to give the story a full five stars. Continue working and refining the novel.

6yr

StehlqueLv15

This is a good start to a game lit novel. Keep working on filling out the characters. The more they feel real the more the readers will get snagged into the story.

6yr

bonbon828Lv13

Reveal spoiler

6yr

flame_of_eternityLv6

i don't read but i will give you 5 stars, maybe i return when this novel have 100 or more chap, so then i will make my review.......................................caracteres

6yr

CZ2128_DeltaLv6

30 year old soldier reincarnated with 40+ int and yet acting like a child! get's bullied by 10 year old, get beaten up, gun's stolen yet do nothing about it.. in short MC is stupid!

6yr

AlteruAuthor

Hey, author here. Thanks for the support so far guys, first time writing a book and it means a lot to me. I know I have some things I can improve on, update wise I can't match Qidian due to work and family stuff but for other things feel free to let me know, I welcome all criticism. I draw inspiration from a lot of sources, notably western fantasy and some eastern light novels. So expect it to be sort of a cross between them. I opted to forego the usual system AI present in these type of stories to allow the reader to feel in the same level at the MC. Future plot wise I am not planning to have a stereotypical harem type deal going on, I find it too corny. There will however be some romance, I'll try and get my wife to help with that haha.

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First_GuardLv12

This story is quite new, but it is also quite promising with good character development. The pace is felt just right, neither too fast or too slow. Even at chapter 12, there are still enough plot hinting for future big fishes.

6yr

Aballer5Lv13

Really can't say alot yet as it has only been 12 chapters as of now. However, I am really enjoying the story so far and hope the author continues with it. The story has done a good job making me anticipate the next chapter with it's interesting mc, as well as the awesome creation power the mc has. Keep it up author and I will keep giving my power stones!

6yr

kingdom2618Lv4

Really good I read everything in one setting, hope you keep righting this story. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 1140 140 140 140

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