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flame_of_eternity
flame_of_eternityLv66yr
2019-03-19 09:36

i don't read but i will give you 5 stars, maybe i return when this novel have 100 or more chap, so then i will make my review.......................................caracteres

The Soldier Mage

Alteru
4.1
35 Chs

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Alteru
AlteruAuthor

Hey, thanks. I know it can be frustrating to be into a story and then you catch up too quick and have to wait so I understand. I wish I could update daily like some of the big releases on here but that's not really feasible for me. Anyhow, thanks for stopping by and book will be here when you're ready. I don't plan on doing anything like locked chapters or etc so don't worry.

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flame_of_eternity
flame_of_eternityLv6

yeah i know how dificult is, be in your time, good luck

Alteru:Hey, thanks. I know it can be frustrating to be into a story and then you catch up too quick and have to wait so I understand. I wish I could update daily like some of the big releases on here but that's not really feasible for me. Anyhow, thanks for stopping by and book will be here when you're ready. I don't plan on doing anything like locked chapters or etc so don't worry.
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Hey, author here. Thanks for the support so far guys, first time writing a book and it means a lot to me. I know I have some things I can improve on, update wise I can't match Qidian due to work and family stuff but for other things feel free to let me know, I welcome all criticism. I draw inspiration from a lot of sources, notably western fantasy and some eastern light novels. So expect it to be sort of a cross between them. I opted to forego the usual system AI present in these type of stories to allow the reader to feel in the same level at the MC. Future plot wise I am not planning to have a stereotypical harem type deal going on, I find it too corny. There will however be some romance, I'll try and get my wife to help with that haha.

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