30 year old soldier reincarnated with 40+ int and yet acting like a child! get's bullied by 10 year old, get beaten up, gun's stolen yet do nothing about it.. in short MC is stupid!
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LIKEWell, thanks for leaving your thoughts. He does spend a fair amount of time in that body without being able to do much, around a year and a half. Then it's mostly trying to fit in and adapt to his new life while waiting to be more independent. As for the guns stolen part, it happens when he's not there and the thief is long gone after, there's not much for him to do but be more cautious in the future. I did want to go away a bit from the genius 6 year old trope. You know the kind, where this person gets reincarnated and they're essentially a God even as a kid while knowing everything. It's more of a progress thing, weak to strong. But I'm still glad for your comments; need to see a bit what my reader's point of view are and how they interpret things, thanks.
In short he is a weak ass mc who let his only advantage (guns) get stolen by the other people? I was really hyped because I thought the mc would be op, but that was just my wishful thinking, wasn't it?
Well in the grand scope of things, it's only really two guns, that need to be recharged with Mana. MC will have plenty of other tricks up his sleeves and is going to be rather OP by that world's standards yes. But I wanted to try and go away from the 'perfect MC', you know the type: Apparently has planned 50 moves ahead of his opponent, never makes any mistakes or errors. I like reading those kinds of novels too but then sometimes it strikes me as a little unrealistic. I feel like making him learn from his mistakes will help make the MC feel more human and relatable. Obviously doesn't mean I'm right but it's my opinion on it.