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Review Detail of HaremQueen in Journey Towards Greatness

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HaremQueen
HaremQueenLv45yrHaremQueen

I really don’t like that fact that the mc just goes around having s£x with someone at every damn town he stays in. Worse of all, they’re all one night stands. What’s the point of having s£x if it’ll only be for a single. I can understand it if he actually dated the girl, but noooo...it’s only for cardinal pleasure. Every “hot” girl, as hot as a show for 8 year olds anyway, that sees him fall into something I call the ‘Wet Dream Syndrome’ and instantly gets smitten by him. I don’t give 2 sh!ts how handsome or how “***y” he looks, it’s only in the fantasy of the author’s head, if he thinks sh!t like that is real. I don’t watch a lot of Pokémon, but I still read this anyway because it had a lot of chapters and the synopsis sounded not half bad. Boy did I regret it... the author really needs to learn how to use punctuation to separate his sentences. A few grammar errors here and there but it was acceptable. I couldn’t bring myself to read any further than chapter 10 so I don’t know what happens after that, but I’m sure it’s all going to be the same crap or much worse.

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Journey Towards Greatness

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Master_Sigil
Master_SigilLv6Master_Sigil

continue reading and don't stop you b*tch

Primordial_Phoenix
Primordial_PhoenixLv10Primordial_Phoenix

Lol

Master_Sigil:continue reading and don't stop you b*tch
Aishiya007
Aishiya007Lv7Aishiya007

Yep only read 11 chapters and thinks he knows all. Just like "I watch Naruto and I know the japanese culture because of it".

Master_Sigil:continue reading and don't stop you b*tch
TrialAndFail
TrialAndFailLv5TrialAndFail

Well no shit people aren't going to read 300+ chapters if they don't like a novel for reasons I very well understand. I also stopped after a few bcs at least the start of the novel is pretty damn bad imo

Aishiya007:Yep only read 11 chapters and thinks he knows all. Just like "I watch Naruto and I know the japanese culture because of it".
7sins_Lord
7sins_LordLv107sins_Lord

harem novels aren't real

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

Beta post?

AzizahPutri
AzizahPutriLv2AzizahPutri

More like decent.if you think what mc did is cool then you're a creep lol

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Beta post?
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

jajaja 😉

AzizahPutri:More like decent.if you think what mc did is cool then you're a creep lol
Pathetic_Uchiha
Pathetic_UchihaLv1Pathetic_Uchiha

stopped at like chap 400 went real bad thought it would get better no no it did not

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HORNYBONKER01
HORNYBONKER01Lv1HORNYBONKER01

Hahaha says a beta

Bob_Uchiha_XD:Beta post?
HORNYBONKER01
HORNYBONKER01Lv1HORNYBONKER01

Only new readers will read this kind of novel or maybe Chinese since they have sick mindset

HORNYBONKER01
HORNYBONKER01Lv1HORNYBONKER01

Only new readers will read this kind of novel or maybe Chinese since they have sick mindset

Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4Bob_Uchiha_XD

jajaja chinese moment 🐕

HORNYBONKER01:Only new readers will read this kind of novel or maybe Chinese since they have sick mindset
TrojanRabbit
TrojanRabbitLv14TrojanRabbit

I actually prefer an mc just going around with one night stands over a harem bc that’s way more realistic, but I do agree that the way this mc goes about it felt forced af. There’s nothing wrong with being fwb’s with a ton of girls but mc just shows up and boom sexy time, it just doesn’t make any sense..

DaoistTi3r6g
DaoistTi3r6gLv2DaoistTi3r6g

ps yo voy toda la historia hasta ahora, pero sí un poco molesto que tengo s*x* a cada rato en cada momento está bien de vez en cuando pero en todos, o sea por favor.

Thanatos_godkiller
Thanatos_godkillerLv1Thanatos_godkiller

But is good, right?