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2022-01-21 13:50

There is alot of discrepancy in the story so I am dropping after 100+ chapters. The author keeps changing the story as she writes. First, Xueyue’s mom died giving birth to her. Her mom had a mysterious identity and she didn’t even know her name. Later it makes it sound like the current wife is her mom and she was raped getting pregant with her. Also the way the male leads are described are confusing. Their personalities keep on changing with new information or event. Xueyue’s feelings also fluctuate going from the first guy to the second and there is no good reason why her feelings would change so drastically and so firmly. All of a sudden, the first guy is described as a horrible guy. It felt like the first guy was supposed to be the mainlead and then was dropped for the second guy.

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If you have read the author's other work "Mr. Tycoon's Daring Wife", then you know what you can expect from this novel. I have not read this novel before it went on hiatus and when the author decided to continue writing this story, we were informed that the plot was slightly revised. Perhaps for the first 50 or so chapters, there might be people who are able to provide some spoilers due to prior knowledge of the chapters before they were taken down for editing and revision. But as the story develops further, I can tell that the plot is not as predictable as it seems and would keep you guessing what's going to happen next. Now that makes an exciting and interesting read right? Writing quality: Great. 👍 Clear sentences, sound grammar. The author pays great attention to details and you would be able to find many examples of beautiful and vivid descriptions in the story—from the character's physique to their clothes, their emotions to their actions, and their surrounding environment adds so much depth to the story and makes it enjoyable to read. These details were so well-written that it allow readers to picture the entire scene in our minds. Updating stability: The author is working hard to give us daily updates. Creation is hard and given that the author is still schooling, I can't, in my good conscience, demand daily updates, more chapters or mass releases. I hope fellow readers could be understanding and be patient to wait for updates even when there might be no updates on some days or even over a period of time. Story development: The story is developing well in my opinion, not too fast, not too slow. This is a female lead story and the title of the novel couldn't be any clearer as to where this story is headed. There are lots of mysteries waiting to be unravelled and the biggest mystery of all at this point as I'm writing this review (as of ch86) is the identity of the male lead that still remains unknown. I can't wait to find out! Character design: There are many of characters in this story and I think the author is doing a good job in building her characters. They are not just names, but the author gives enough descriptions to give us an understanding of their personality, character and values. It makes you feel like you actually know the character as a person, forming a connection to the characters. My favourite characters in the story are the members of the Li Family and I can confidently say that they are the universal favourites. World background: This is the first novel I'm reading that is set in the historical period and it's refreshing, a break from all the modern romance novels that I've been reading. As I'm reading the story, I feel like I'm transported back to the past, no doubt because of the author's writing prowess. I think having watched Chinese period dramas before in the past helped me in my imagination of the story. In conclusion, this novel is definitely worth a read! 👍😁 I'm glad I picked this up and I'm enjoying the journey!

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