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2020-06-16 22:22

The beginning I find ridiculous. The woman is beaten with paddles, so obviously its normal that her entire body covered with bruises, had a cracked skull and she survived? Okay first of alll... no one will survive that type of beating! they probably broke her bones... even if not, she would have sustained an internal injury which cause internal bleeding and in turn shut different organs in the body... and the author said that a person saved her life unknowingly by putting a lotus flowers above her grave? because she was able to survive hypothermia? ridiculous... absolutely ridiculous.. i would have believed it if the flower has some kind of medical properties and it is a fantasy novel but no! Then when a rich family found her, she has this ghastly white skin and some bruishes, omo thats stupid like ... she would literally have purplish bruise all over her body and not a white skin and they wouldnt be able to judge her a once beauty because the beating would already deformed her face... and i doubt she will be able to reclaim her beautiful appearance because guess what! theres no plastic surgery in ancient times...

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