Review Detail of Pgimz in Dream Star

This can and will definitely be a good novel since there are already loyal readers since it just started. Trust me, it gets better with each chapter. Good job author. Once this novel is edited it will become a gem. Getting lost in the first chapter of a novel confuses a reader. There is so much going on and I couldn't keep up. The writing format was tough to follow and there are a few grammatical errors. However, you're doing good with each chapter. Keep writing dear writer. Perfect practice makes perfect. Good read!