Review Detail of XOMatsumaeohana in Dream Star

Can't believe you have a novel. Must be nerve wracking and really brave of you to put the novel up. Will read and criticize appropriately.

Yeah. This was a pretty risky move, I'm not the best writer either and there will be grammar mistakes. But ~ I do my best with my edits for mistakes, so the overall flow of the story should still be there 😆 Please do ~ !

OMG 10K 😂😂 That's like 10 average chapters. Nice story though.

Writing a story is pretty nerve wracking the first time and doesn't get any easier with time. I still haven't gotten the courage to put up my story in front of others.I really admire and respect you for putting yourself out like this. I'll definitely check out your story....

😝 I split it (6 prologue) and 1st chapter, so it should be okay to read now ~

😅 This isn't the first time for me. But well I haven't posted my stories online in a very long time, so I suppose it's more or less the same. 😲💪 Fighting, you can do it too! I'll read once you post 😆

I'm excited to read this book😁. Thanks for your hard work Author-san.

I read the novels you recommended in your comments and none of them disappoint. Im pretty sure your own work will be also be a bang! Good luck! Will be supporting this.

😅 Thank you 😊 but (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ) I know I'm not the best writer, so feel free to point out the mistakes and once you've read a bit. To leave a proper review too ~

I hope you enjoy the story ~ looking forward to reading your thoughts on the comments or a review 😊

O0F-- I WAS ALREADY HOOKED BY THE SUMMARY THEN I SCROLLED THROUGH THE COMMENTS SECTION AND GOT EVEN JUNGSHOOKED TO THE POINT MY MIND BLANKED OUT😂😂 I DIDNT EXPECT THE AUTHOR TO BE SOMEONE I WOULD KNOW 😍😍 GOOD JOB FOR THIS NOVEL XOMatsumaeohana

Omg!!!you have a novel..ill definitely read this one.😉😍

😆😆👋👋 Hello there fellow FMHM fan, I hope you enjoy my story, leave comments, a review and spare a power stone if you enjoy it 😊

YASSS😂 I'LL DEFINITELY WILL😍😍 IM CURRENTLY LIKING IT SO FAR

Found u almost in every novel i read😂 and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...

Found u almost in every novel i read😂 and today i just found your book..will add it in my library and gv it a try..chaiyo...

😆 another person with a good taste in novels then ~ hope you enjoy the novel. Hope to see your comments and maybe a review when you've read enough.

Author author LV6 that's what I saw first Then I noticed your name Saw your badges And finally came across your novel Well I like the synopsis And I prefer long chapters therefore I've added this novel in my library I'll give it a chance first and then give a proper review♥

...... Dang. That's amazing. 10k? *takes in a deep breath* for a single chapter? How long are the other chapters? Or did you split them up, like 'I'm a Reader' (1), then (2), and so on? I'm curious.

I split it, so the long 10K chapter is the prologue and the 1st chapter. The other chapters in the novel are in between 900-1.5K words. Sometimes there's a 2K one but rarely.