Review Detail of Lomyril in Reborn as the Flash's Twin Brother
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Sorry, but I feel like I need to drop this novel. While on the one hand I overall like the direction of the story, there's just a few too many things that are hard to swallow. It's great that he can travel to other worlds like the Flash has done with his super speed. But where the the rented apartment come from? And the Ferrari? It's not like you'd be able to rent that car from anywhere. I can give a pass to the slow and inconsistent updates, or the writing quality. As I mentioned before, I tend to like the direction the story is going. Still, when combined with the flaws I mentioned above it's just too much.
Reborn as the Flash's Twin Brother
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He traveled from one world to another. Where did he get the rented apartment from? Or the car? The way the story is written is that he had them from before... which is impossible, since this is a new world he has only been at for a short while. Renting a Ferrari would also be impossible unless he had a lot of money or fame. He is a doctor, if I recall, but I doubt he would bring that much money with him when traveling to a new world with just his Flash suit. Finally, I also seem to remember that the author did admit their mistake that he shouldn't have had either one. The author had forgotten that he was in a new world and wouldn't have the necessary background for those items.
50ShadesOfAss:does that matter.... your points were invalid. I dropped this novel for a different reason but why does the Ferrari or Apartment matter? He's a billionaire so it's not unexpected.