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ladlightfoot
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I tried. I really tried to give this story a fair chance. when I saw that the author got an 'editor' around chapter 30-40, I was just telling myself that it was going to get better.Spoiler warning, it doesn't.I personally read until around ch 60, and somehow the writing quality became even worse. Run-on sentences, straight-up misspelled words, and poor quality in being able to write fights (which is a big part of the story), all add up to a good idea of a story, yet extremely poor execution.The only reason I have anything positive about anything about this series is that the monsters are at least interesting, the idea of the power system for both the monsters and the people are cool to think about, and there are good reasons for various world-building elements. But that's it.Don't waste your coins here.

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any recommendations dot stories with actual good grammar and cohesion? I used to read here a lot like five years ago but since my English and standards have gotten a lot higher/ better so most things on this website seem unreadable. sooo do you have any interesting stories to recommend? ty

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