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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot7mth
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    Now I'm curious, what are the other 2 requirements he accidentally fulfilled? Maybe have 'worshippers' and divine assistants?

    [Requirements for reaching godhood: analyzing... Fulfilled 3 out of 10 conditions.]
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    I am a Problematic Dungeon Master
    Fantasy · SeraphWedd
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot9mth
    Replied to Veer_Singh_6983

    I personally believe that the author either is getting ripped off by this 'editor', or there just isn't one. With where you are, you aren't even where this 'editor' supposedly started working. Just move on, because it only gets worse

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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot9mth
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    I tried. I really tried to give this story a fair chance. when I saw that the author got an 'editor' around chapter 30-40, I was just telling myself that it was going to get better.Spoiler warning, it doesn't.I personally read until around ch 60, and somehow the writing quality became even worse. Run-on sentences, straight-up misspelled words, and poor quality in being able to write fights (which is a big part of the story), all add up to a good idea of a story, yet extremely poor execution.The only reason I have anything positive about anything about this series is that the monsters are at least interesting, the idea of the power system for both the monsters and the people are cool to think about, and there are good reasons for various world-building elements. But that's it.Don't waste your coins here.

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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot1yr
    Commented
    Bai Zemin looked to where Wu Yijun was pointing and almost fell to the ground when he saw the little green plant waving one of its branches as if it was saying hello.
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · XIETIAN
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot1yr
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    I'd suggest a couple displacer beasts as treasure guards. Six legged panther-like fey, with two ten-foot tenatcles coming from their front shoulders that end in spiked pads. They give off a displacement (hence the name) ability, making them appear close to where they are, but not quite, and are more capable of evading AOE attacks

    Ch 58 58. Make Me Cum
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    Sin System: Demonic Harem After Reincarnation
    Fantasy · FireEngine
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot2yr
    Replied to Raqai_White

    I'm guessing that the use of 'inverted' here is similar to 'upside down'. Best idea I have, since googling it just comes up with and upside down cone

    Han Sen scanned the Light Well. He saw that in the large place in space, there were no stars. He was able to see an asteroid of an inverted cone shape. It was hanging in space.
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • ladlightfoot
    ladlightfoot2yr
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    I like that this is describing what each level can do to a universe. One just destroys, one is a natural disaster, one is capable of complete annihilation, and the last can reboot the system.

    The demon lady replied, "From what we know, God Spirits have four levels, which are destruction, disaster, annihilation, and reboot. If you are talking about his power, that is hard to judge. High-level God Spirits are stronger than low-level God Spirits. That is for sure. Because all the God Spirits took over the universe's creatures when descending, their powers are affected by their bodies. The best they can be is true god class. They cannot go any higher. Even annihilation God Spirits were easily killed by the master."
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    Super Gene
    Sci-fi · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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