Story is good. The grammar last I read was very bad. Not unreadable, but it took maybe twice as long for me to formulate a good quality sentence in my head. The story has a very good concept and the pacing is good as well. The biggest qualm I have is the picture, why the lovecractian is the face of the book doesn’t make much sense to me. To the point I’ve read it doesn’t look anything like that.
AnWan
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