If you were actually a person that had good writing sensibilities I would ask you to write a novel on this. But due to your review I would have to ask you to give the concept to someone else to write.

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So, like much to be found on this site, the novel is subpar in every standard beside updating stability. I would not recommend reading this novel. It is not offensive, but a very disappointing execution of a very good concept. There are many more novels that are better than this. The overall the concept was very good. A viscous young lady of the imperial family goes after the reincarnated female MC. But the execution of the concept leaves much to be wanted. 3/5 Writing Quality: The writing quality was barely acceptable. It was easy to read with no horrendous grammatical or spelling errors. From a technical standpoint it was average at best. It looked like a grade 8 or 9 wrote it. 4/5 Updating Stability: I wasn’t able to watch the author updates it as they were reading it. In other words I have just read it this hour. Looking at the chapter list it looks like they update it every day, taking weekends for a break. Though this past month or two the updating wasn’t stable. I’m assuming it was because of the holidays so that’s why it is 4/5 instead of 3/5. 2/5 Story Development: The development of the story was very fast paced. The prologue was only 2 chapters. Which may not be a bad thing, but it could have taken 5-10 chapters and had been decently paced. Within the first 2 chapters the first climax was reached. What should’ve taken an entire arc took 2 chapters. That is a very disappointing occurrence. 2/5 Character Design: The design of each character is described in no more than 3 sentences total. For the MC, if the prologue was expanded to about 5-10 chapters instead of 2, we could have had a much more in-depth understanding of the MC before the reincarnation. The “vicious young miss” was only described in those words, we did not have anything to show us how viscous she was. We didn’t have any details about any characters appearance besides “beautiful”. Extremely disappointing to know nothing about any character, let alone the 2 main characters. 2/5 World Background: Again, if the prologue was expanded to 5-10 chapters, we could have had a much better understanding of the novel before anything was changed due to the MC. We were not given a single description about the setting (world, continents, empires, etc...) in any form. This could’ve been explained to us in the first few chapters of the reincarnation. Giving us an overview of the empire they were in, then a slightly more descriptive explanation of the city the MC lives on would have been a exponentially better introduction than the MC “waking up” and greeting the mother who we know nothing about. 1/10 Overall Review: This work leads much to be wanted. The concept, like most, could’ve been very interesting and enticing if the author had any form of competence above a year 9 writing in the middle of mathematics class because of boredom.

Best way to make a guy accept anything. Especially when it’s some magical system.

FR. My friend and I were going l around to some good stalls cuz he had never been there and we got stopped by the police like 4 times. I know I have tattoos and all but it didn’t help that I had a 6”10’ black guy walking around in a tank top and Hawaiian shirt.

Can the author or translator please delete the previous chapter. It is obvious it was a concept they decided to change some details of. It is elementary mistakes like this which is why your novel won’t do well. Try to spend time going over these chapters to flesh them out better. It will bring you more readers that stick with the novel longer. Everyone who reads it will be happier and you will look back and not see this novel (which had great potential) as a mistake. I’ve seen a lot of authors who had great ideas on this site, end a novel abruptly because they weren’t happy with the first 50-100 chapters. This is because they decided to post as many as they could to get monetized. This novel has a great premise that could be worked over so much better by simply eliminating elementary mistakes.

So is it this chapter or the next that is supposed to happen? Or do they both happen? Can someone clear up this confusion.

Great novel, but it needs to be posted more.

This is a very good novel. It isn’t complicated, but also isn’t super laid back either. The “cheat” isn’t an extremely powerful one, it is a big advantage but doesn’t feel like it is to much. The only thing is the updates, I don’t know if it was dropped but I do hope it is updated again.

This is a very good story. It has a more unique form of reincarnation. Most novels will have them reincarnate but its only about the soul and never about the body’s family or they will be transported to an alternate universes of themself. The characters are really good and nothing is overly complicated. The pacing is nice, if you do get a bit confused just read a few more chapters and it will be cleared up. The only criticism is there are barely 2 chapters a month.

This is a very laidback story. It does have some classic character tropes, and they all do have a similar backstory (up to about chapter 50). This doesn’t take away from the uniqueness of each disciple. They all do have classic behaviors of their trope but with a unique spin. My only critique is that it shouldn’t be called Yandere but instead Fanatics, Zealots, Martyrs etc...

Honestly very good novel. Idea is done very well and the story isn’t only about the new soul/reincarnated. The original body has his own story, the side characters are fleshed out a good amount. The only problem I have is the updates are slow.

Story is good. The grammar last I read was very bad. Not unreadable, but it took maybe twice as long for me to formulate a good quality sentence in my head. The story has a very good concept and the pacing is good as well. The biggest qualm I have is the picture, why the lovecractian is the face of the book doesn’t make much sense to me. To the point I’ve read it doesn’t look anything like that.

The last bit had me laughing on the floor

She’s trying to raise him into her mate isn’t she?

Thanks for the chapters

The novel is great, I don’t know if it was dropped or the author had personal reasons but it’s been 2+ years and I don’t see any notice. I really want to know if the author has gone to another site or has done a different novel.

Have you dropped this novel? It has been 2+ years since you last updated it. If you have it is a shame because it was an interesting novel.

This is very promising. The only problem I see is that it may have been dropped from being written. The story needs time to understand. Some aspects won’t make sense at first but it is explained later. I wouldn’t recommend reading on this site though. LightNovel.org has double the chapters but even that sit is a bit outdated for this novel.

He can afford bread. It is more of that after the fall he lost the weapons of the predecessor. They say that bread is 2 coppers. If you read on the story you’ll see he makes enough money.