Review Detail of Shine_Geo in The Runaway is a Politician's Daughter

There are a minimum grammatical errors in some of the sentences but to be honest it can be hardly be noticed so the text and dialogues are fine. The way you made instructions at the start of the first chapter is nice, this way the reader can understand what the dialogue mean. Character development is fine and it improves bit by bit and the story development is starting very great so carefully change the way of your writing if you want to improve. I am impressed by how motivated and inspired you are when you write, I mean publishing 7 chapter a week, for me that's incredible but there is still one minor problem for me in my opinion is the problems with me imagining the settings. So overall, it has a lot of potential and may have a chance at being contracted, so keep on writing(. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)