a ver heart warming story it emphases on everything and great writing . I wish there were many other fanfics like this ........ May u write many more of these .....😁👍
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NO HAREM PLEEEASE THE STORY WILL BE BETTER WITHOUT IT JUST ONE OR TWO GIRLS ENOUGH AND DON'T TAKE ANYONE'S GIRL TO GIVE IT TO HIM JUST GIVE HIM A GIRL THAT DOESN'T HAVE ANYONE LIKE JERICO MELASCULA
The rest are rated low since there is not much to go on for now. Love is not a sin but one of the seven Virtues whose counterpart is lust one of the seven sins. Making the title quite misleading.
I’m gonna be honest here, I know my grammar is bad but dang, you beat me to it. Your lack of comas are uncountable, don’t get me wrong, your English is good it’s just your lack of comas is fcking me over. Another thing that was a turn off for me was Jax character, he’s too emotional for me. I’m not saying he’s bad, he’s actually good it’s just me being weird and like having a calm mc that can’t be triggered easily. As for the story, it’s amazing, there’s only a few of us who writes seven sins ffc so I hope you don’t drop this, and please don’t do harem if you’re not confident on doing it right.
Pffft?! Sin of love? 5 star for me!!! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem! Harem!
Well the sin of love has no impulsion towards love. The starting was unrealistic.it was written in starting lines that he had 'women'. Then why would he be so naive a some beta wimp here. Also people just all shouting no harem or no stealing and all. Idk *sigh* this is a fanfic not original so how the hell would writer give it intreasting elements. No creativity used and idk with such a big change how timeline doesnt change. I mean no events should not be same. Well dropping tis at 30+chaps because i feel like wasting time. Sin of love... Lol do you think we are idiot and take all **** u throw at us. There was no single point apart forced plot where he a ted upon his sin.
In the first part, it was great but the more the author deviate from the story the more it became boring or just plain senseless. Why? Because this is a fanfic. The author likes to deviate from the main storyline, I get it. You want to expand the story than what was shown on the manga. Great. But when you use the main characters just to compare power levels and make them the king kai of dragonball or rock lee of naruto it just raises a very big question "Why make a fanfic of an anime if you'll just use them as background characters that are useless as dirt?" You make him Meliodas's nephew just to justify him to be a half demon in order to be related to the main characters just to brush over his relation to them as very close to the point that the main characters thought him their knowledge which he doesn't use then give him a totally made up teacher which came out of nowhere, to impart him knowledge and training that is totally useless because he only uses powers he got from the system. The way the story goes, you can erase the main characters and replace them with normal knights and you still have your story. Why do you even make a fanfic if you can write your own?
I don't want to be a partykiller... But what about the commandment of Love? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
no harem boooooooooooooooooooo! ...................................................................................................................................
LOVE IS NOT A SIN, LOVE IS A COMMANDMENT. LOVE IS NOT A SIN, LOVE IS A COMMANDMENT. LOVE IS NOT A SIN, LOVE IS A COMMANDMENT. LOVE IS NOT A SIN, LOVE IS A COMMANDMENT. LOVE IS NOT A SIN, LOVE IS A COMMANDMENT.
After completing the entire arc of the 7 sins you could send him to another unmarried man like Marvel ... what do you think of that????????????????
Natasha was an Indian girl. Her misfortune was that her father died in her childhood. Her father was the biggest businessman of the city, but when he died, all his wealth was taken away by her uncle . After that, after hitting with the car , Natasha died on the spot . Natasha loved watching Korean drama since childhood , that is why perhaps accidentally she came to Korean world . And only after that he comes to know that there is a system on his body and that system talks with him, eats, drinks and sleeps with him at the same time . Now in the story we have to see whether Natasha falls in love with her system or marries the system or not. There is still time to go. Friends, if you want to go now then please continue reading this book . announcement [ this story's content is sex . so there are many chapters here about sex , and there also you can see threesome , foursome and fivesome bedstory ] [ it is also a caltivation story ] [ And the most important thing is she isn't a innocent girl]
This is a fan-made story. I do not work with or own any part of Miraculous: Tales of Ladybug and Cat Noir. This story takes place after the original Hawkmoth, Gabriel Agreste, has been defeated. Marinette and Adrien are a couple, which angers Lila. She vows to get revenge on Marinette, Ladybug, and anyone else who tries to get in her way. A new hero has surfaced in Paris, with the Peacock Miraculous. After the new “hero” refuses to become allies with Ladybug and Cat Noir, they are suspicious she is working with the new Hawk Moth. Find out the truth as this fan-made story unfolds.
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Aurora was a young woman in her 20s, very smart and perfect looking with huge breasts, but she had a flaw and her flaw is infidelity, she couldn't be faithful to her boyfriends and she loved having sex, men or women she loved having her breasts sucked, finally ended up being killed by her boyfriend after he discovered the betrayal, when she woke up she found herself in the body of a hot young queen and gained a system of bitches, finally she can have her harem of men and women (the protagonist is a bitch)