In the first part, it was great but the more the author deviate from the story the more it became boring or just plain senseless. Why? Because this is a fanfic. The author likes to deviate from the main storyline, I get it. You want to expand the story than what was shown on the manga. Great. But when you use the main characters just to compare power levels and make them the king kai of dragonball or rock lee of naruto it just raises a very big question "Why make a fanfic of an anime if you'll just use them as background characters that are useless as dirt?" You make him Meliodas's nephew just to justify him to be a half demon in order to be related to the main characters just to brush over his relation to them as very close to the point that the main characters thought him their knowledge which he doesn't use then give him a totally made up teacher which came out of nowhere, to impart him knowledge and training that is totally useless because he only uses powers he got from the system. The way the story goes, you can erase the main characters and replace them with normal knights and you still have your story. Why do you even make a fanfic if you can write your own?
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