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Review Detail of Titivillus in The Sovereignty System

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Titivillus
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So, i usually don't write reviews but i'm trying to start this now. This novel shows an interesting concept in the beginning but this is the autor first story, the world building was done right so far, at least in description, but the character doesn't have a unique personality, the autor focus too much in the system he created and all his awesome features and skills, there is almost no dialog, in 30 chapters he didn't talk to not even 5 people that the name of the characters matters so far. It's almost a monolog with the MC and his A.I. system... Also, the way the buildings work so far makes we think, what's the point of the MC trying to get people to live with him in his new fortress if he doesn't need anyone for anything? So, despite the good points about the world and the stability of updates so far, all else seems lacking...

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