Writing Quality: Pretty good Stability: Pretty good Story Dev: Meh Char Design: Meh World Background: Not bad Honestly, I hate when people include netspeak in their writing. Example: *sighs*. NO. Instead: Ben sighed or Ben couldn't help but sigh. His ability/system is extremely OP so I'm not really keen on reading anymore. That's what ruins the development and char design for me. The Background is starting to develop from where I read but it's all overshadowed by this OP system. Honestly this system isn't even OP, it's autowin.
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