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Su_machuk
Su_machukLv65yr
2019-01-21 09:45

Love the way you wrote, it's one of world of magic with lots of potential to reveal and from the best original novel. your imagination's works well with timeline inside original novel, with a little twist around the story of other important character's maybe you untapped how's other country magic story (https://***.pottermore.com). If this story works well i bet you can have more than 2000 chapters or few other title without stay side by side with original story. try to write a spell name in every magic action which is add more joy to read, dont make a reader imagination's running wild. keep up the good work

[HP] World Creation Game

LordOfRot
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LordOfRot
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Thank you very much! I'll try to make the novel as interesting to read as possible. ^__^

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