Review Detail of KoFu_ in Re: Sword Emperor(old)

Writing Quality: Is okay, sometimes it is pretty hard to read and you have to re-read the paragraph to get the meaning. Uses the same world a lot and doesn't use synonymous words. But is OK compared to some MTL trash-quality that I have seen on this site. Updates: Fairly frequent, sometimes he has a month that he writes every day, sometimes he takes a break of 2 weeks up to 1 month. Story Development: I read up to chapter 10-ish (don't read my reading status, fool you). I don't remember too well about this story since I did my review back then and got deleted, so I'm writing it again. This story is SLOW AS HELL. Ten chapters in and he didn't do jack ****, only: + took five hs to make his character when is usually made in 5 minutes. + wander in the tutorial zone + found his friends and repeated exactly what they told the reader 1 chapter ago. And the dude is still in the tutorial taking his time scrolling like he is some hobo. Dude, you have ten years of quest experience in your mind, don't you know there are unique non-repeatible quest? Don't you have fear that people will find them before you? Not even a shadow of doubt cross his mind, he's chatting while drinking coffee while spoon feeding basic information to his noobs friends. Character: Delusional of grandiose, stupid, and illogical at times. He has red eyes and blond hair (I think), and so he's instantly noble? Ok...If that was the case he would be detained and question his precedence, since there are not many nobles. He could tell his dears noobs friends to delete the character and make it again, or even better! call them before he started up the game...but no, no mention of that. He thinks he's better than anyone only because he knows the future :facepalm:... World Background: A system where the IA can make its own choices and decide where a player can take 5 hours making a character where other people has a few minutes. Not fair and non-sense. They knew each other for a few minutes, and she's going to give that huge advantage to him? No logical there. So for all that is said, is 2/5 stars. I will back up my review since "the system" purge novels it seems. 14/06/2019