I really like this story. Sometimes, it changes from past tense to present tense randomly, but I'm okay with that. The switch from normal narration to the mc's thoughts is also not shown through any mean, but I'm guessing its because of the bad formatting of WN, from what I read from the author's note. I think the characters have more depth into them than all the characters of every novel in this site combined, so it's really a breath of fresh air.
Yorth
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