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K_VGAMERS
K_VGAMERSLv131yrK_VGAMERS

The story is really nice great read as it kept me from my boredom, but I think it would be more wholesome 😊 if you had added more details about stuff and the other characters as you mostly focus on the Mc. For example we know nothing about rose and Richard relationships, or how the what abilities the embodiment of affinities gave him or what the fusion of every bloodlines did. Almost forgot what happened to Icarus why did you drop him after his major upgrade like he could grow and change to different weapons, I wish he play a more major part. I wish I had read it earlier to comment more 😕. Wish you could do a redo thought and add more to it. If you're going to do it plz leave a comment or the link so I can read and comment as you update it 😁. Thank you 😊

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The Craftsman

WickedQueen2

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Thanks for the feedback, I'm actually working on the next draft of the book now, sadly I won't be uploading it as in the past my work was stolen and sold on Amazon. Thank you for the support and I'll be sure to take what you've said into consideration while I continue working on it!!!

K_VGAMERS
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OK let me know if there is an update.