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The story was very well written, but it had nothing to do with the Avatar world! Literally in 64 chapters not a single bender was included in the story. All of the MC's friends disappear in one way or another from the novel, so this doesn't even contribute anything to the future volumes. Basically, this entire volume 1 could be summed up in a single sentence as a prologue in volume 2: "Luke grew up in the slums and enlisted in the Fire Nation army." There, that's it. The entirety of this story in a single sentence, without missing any crucial information. I feel bad to put this so bluntly since the author obviously put a lot of effort into this, but this first volume is pointless to read
All That Was Left: Book I: Survival
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Frankly, I have to agree with you on many points. A lot of things from the first book will be relevant later in ways that would be spoilers to say, but notwithstanding, I already am rewriting this first book. It will still be the same setting and such, but I plan on making it a lot more interesting. To tell you the truth, I really appreciate this review. It feels the most honest and constructive. I have an AO3 account where I am currently working on a rewritten version since this is 5 year old work back from when I was a Highschool Freshman. Notwithstanding, I appreciate the honesty, but I still hope you stick around. It's good to have honest people reviewing my work.