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shweta_verma
shweta_vermaLv45yr
2019-11-19 19:12

It is my second novel in web novel. Story and all the characters are really very amazing, I'm fully impressed with the characters and sorry too 😍😍😍😍😍

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NixxxiE
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Thank you! Do check out my 2nd novel: Femme Fatale: The King's Deadly Temptress :)

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Writing Quality: When I started reading this wonderful novel it was common to see a misspelling here or an incorrect capitalization there. But as with most new authors and just in general, it's not uncommon for stuff like that to slip through. After making it all of the way to the most recent chapter, I can confidently say that the errors and mistakes have greatly been reduced, which is great! Stability of Updates: You've kept a great and stable schedule for updating and posting chapters. While you may spend a majority of your time on discord I can truly see the amount of time and effort you put into writing these chapters, and it's amazing. The content of every chapter is wonderful and simply fantastic. Story Development: There have been many twists and turns, unexpected events and surprise developments that leave me wanted, no craving more. I especially loved when Samantha just left everyone behind while pretending to have lost her memories again, just so she could make some videos for Mia. Something like that is really heart touching, and I have to say it made me cry so props to you on that. Character Design: Both Daniel and Samantha posses a mysterious air to them. Like they both have a hidden side we don't quite know about yet. Obviously we've seen that Daniel used to be a street racer and we know about Samantha's childhood. But I feel as though there is something else, something darker lurking in the shadows. Which makes everything super surreal, and honestly I can't wait to see how they grow and develop with the story!! World Background: It's rather interesting that so far almost everyone that we've interacted with has some sort of powerful backing, but at the same time it makes everything all the more interesting. The world is an interesting one, I'll give it that, between the company side of things and Samantha's struggle to strive and the rocky relationship tensions between everyone else it makes for an interesting overall development. My Thoughts: This story is simply amazing, awe inducing. While there may be a few spelling/grammar errors here or there overall they aren't too bad, and they definitely get better the further you read. With constant updates and amazing content within those chapters, you are sure to be happy and excited fore very release. The story and character growth is nail biting, with enough twists and surprises to keep you on the edge of your seat in anticipation. I would definitely recommend this to everyone who loves CEO novels or Romantic Relationship novels. I have to admit that this is my first CEO style novel that I've ever read, and before this I've never really had a good view on these sorts of novels. But after reading this I feel as though my whole perspective of CEO novels, and other novels, has changed. It's a wonderful thing that our dearest author Nixxie has done for us. She should be praised and thanked for such a wonderful piece. Continue on and be strong Nyx, know that we have your back no matter what is going on <3. Your most bestest friend, ~Milk

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