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Tinalynge
TinalyngeLv155yr
2019-05-12 20:16

Writing Quality: The writing of this story is wonderful. I was fully submerged into the story while reading it. It flows so nicely and you rarely meet any mistakes, and the few you do meet do not really bother you. Stability of Updates: Great! I love the update stability, it is reliable and from now on I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Story Development: I am usually kinda apprehensive when a novel start with a relationship which is build on a contract, but the story between Samantha and Daniel is so sweet and their romance is truly a joy to read! I love everything about this story, it has a great pace, neither too fast nor too slow, everything happens at a good pace, and you never get bored, but you do not feel that the plot is rushed either. Character Design: I really like the characters. All of them are well fleshed out and described so well, their personalities come out in the story at the right time. Not everything is explained at the beginning, but slowly building up mystery and unraveling it all right in front of the reader. World Background: The world is explained well. There are never any info dumps to explain the world they live in, everything is well described in the right time.

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NixxxiE
NixxxiEAuthor

Thank you very much for your review, Ms. Tina ♥ It's such an honor to receive these words from you. Truly a motivation for me to continue writing. ♥

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Daoist884808Lv3

Are there lots of misunderstanding between ML and FL

NixxxiE
NixxxiEAuthor

no.

Daoist884808:Are there lots of misunderstanding between ML and FL
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Writing Quality: When I started reading this wonderful novel it was common to see a misspelling here or an incorrect capitalization there. But as with most new authors and just in general, it's not uncommon for stuff like that to slip through. After making it all of the way to the most recent chapter, I can confidently say that the errors and mistakes have greatly been reduced, which is great! Stability of Updates: You've kept a great and stable schedule for updating and posting chapters. While you may spend a majority of your time on discord I can truly see the amount of time and effort you put into writing these chapters, and it's amazing. The content of every chapter is wonderful and simply fantastic. Story Development: There have been many twists and turns, unexpected events and surprise developments that leave me wanted, no craving more. I especially loved when Samantha just left everyone behind while pretending to have lost her memories again, just so she could make some videos for Mia. Something like that is really heart touching, and I have to say it made me cry so props to you on that. Character Design: Both Daniel and Samantha posses a mysterious air to them. Like they both have a hidden side we don't quite know about yet. Obviously we've seen that Daniel used to be a street racer and we know about Samantha's childhood. But I feel as though there is something else, something darker lurking in the shadows. Which makes everything super surreal, and honestly I can't wait to see how they grow and develop with the story!! World Background: It's rather interesting that so far almost everyone that we've interacted with has some sort of powerful backing, but at the same time it makes everything all the more interesting. The world is an interesting one, I'll give it that, between the company side of things and Samantha's struggle to strive and the rocky relationship tensions between everyone else it makes for an interesting overall development. My Thoughts: This story is simply amazing, awe inducing. While there may be a few spelling/grammar errors here or there overall they aren't too bad, and they definitely get better the further you read. With constant updates and amazing content within those chapters, you are sure to be happy and excited fore very release. The story and character growth is nail biting, with enough twists and surprises to keep you on the edge of your seat in anticipation. I would definitely recommend this to everyone who loves CEO novels or Romantic Relationship novels. I have to admit that this is my first CEO style novel that I've ever read, and before this I've never really had a good view on these sorts of novels. But after reading this I feel as though my whole perspective of CEO novels, and other novels, has changed. It's a wonderful thing that our dearest author Nixxie has done for us. She should be praised and thanked for such a wonderful piece. Continue on and be strong Nyx, know that we have your back no matter what is going on <3. Your most bestest friend, ~Milk

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