Definitely not the Author of this novel. I just noticed this is his first work so thought of leaving a review. You can also leave a review hopefully the Author would appreciate it. So, at first, I would like to say... Read at your own risk, you have been warned!-1 Writing quality is so-so. I mean it's so-so but it can possibly be ****. Which is kinda sad. Read at your own risk, you have been warned!-2 Stability of Updates - Damn, just look this Author, he only posts one chapter a day and not to mention they are so short. Only 1K something word... *sigh* Just tell him to stop writing. So, slow update - Read at your own risk, you have been warned!-3 Story Development - Now thing gets weird. This Author doesn't even know what he is writing. Does he even have a future plan? and look at his time skips. I can only say- OMG... Ah, then comes H scenes, he is just useless, forget it. Does he not know that not everyone can read those content? So, Read at your own risk, you have been warned!-4 Character Design - No comments... It's just another fanfic so let me just skip this part... World Background - Same reason as above... I'll skip this one too. Hello, This is definitely not the Author of the novel and this is your - you have been warned!-5 (P.S.- Don't read the novel *kms*)

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The story began very well, I only hope that if the author makes a harem the MC of the story does not have a child, it would ruin the story, and I also hope that the MC is Op,

Im getting angry always. i can't understand. He is fucking cultivating but why the **** he is not improving at all? What's the point of those idiotic skills .. Generic cultivation novels really sucks. Haixt. This novel really is not my forte really annoying to read. For **** sake all those cheats of him and lucky encounter of some treasures he is still fucking martial king. And there's no goal for mc for getting stronger but he is weak spot so. And there's no fucking action at all.. All author do is make mc have sex and make mc acts like beta male. Being scared on girls all the time.. Always under On girls acting a dick. I'm reading coz I want to enjoy reading not to get annoyed everytime haixt.. What a waste of time.. I advice those people that don't like a generic idiot novel better not read this. It will just make you mad reading this **** I'm done 🤒🤒

I don't want your stories rating to drop so I won't rate lower but you write in a way that makes it impossible for anyone that hasn't read the original to understand what's going on. You introduce people and things like everyone reading already knows who/what they are, like "I went to her inn," who's inn? How did he know about it? We get no info and the MC just walks around like everyone knows whats going on

This was a good beginning of the story, I hope the fanfic does not have the thousands of mistakes MC made in the original story😶🤠😴☺️😫😴😃😎😴😇☺️😋😂😊😀😊😇😂🤠😃😎😂😏😴😃😀😂😯😎😊🤠

More chapters please 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🤤👍👍🤤👍👍 thanks for the great start

The story itself is that of a fanfic, but the original is far better in terms of character devlopement and story. this seems like a sloppy rework of an already good story. if you want to read anything related to this just read the original. the only reason this book has 4 stars is simply because of all the bots that are boosting it. honestly all in all dont bother with this book, its very underwelming could have been 1000× better if some thought was actually put into it.

well so sad there's a alot of negative feedback on the readers i hope u will improve ur grammar and you need to improve the mc behaviour because we dont like his personality.