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Ren0Zero
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2019-01-01 21:39

As many others, I have read the previous novel. The 'original', as you might say. I was hooked at that one but it lacked...'spice'. It was good and all but the characters appeared to fast. They sprouted out of tge ground like weed and disappeared for several chapters until they once again meet with the MC. The MC himself was brilliant. The idea and focus behind him was great but the story development threw him into a loop of becoming strong af and getting stomped like a *****. Since the reboot has only a single chapter, for now, I will refrain from commenting on it but I like the way it is going. Despite the very short sentences that Odin and Kai exchanhed their character is peeking threw and the description of actions and various aspects has improved. Some parts are less detailed, which is good, and some have received a different focus. Hard to say based on one chapter but at least I have hope for this to be one of my favorite novels. Especially since I have yet to find a webnovel in the Marvel and DC universe that can rival 'The Spider'. I'll end it here and hope to see myself confirmed in the next chapters.

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Cikiya
CikiyaLv14

try Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker if u have not read it yet

Ren0Zero
Ren0ZeroLv12

Already did.

Cikiya:try Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker if u have not read it yet
WolfLord
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JMaian
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I just found the spider looking forward to reading it.

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Supreme_Leader
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The spider is one of the best. Try reading A third path to the future The pyramid of life DC - Remastered edition

Ren0Zero
Ren0ZeroLv12

*kisses your armpits* Of course, supreme Leader!

Supreme_Leader:The spider is one of the best. Try reading A third path to the future The pyramid of life DC - Remastered edition
Gartard
GartardLv5

Try The Merchant of Death . Marvel fan fiction , i loved it .

Ren0Zero:*kisses your armpits* Of course, supreme Leader!
Ren0Zero
Ren0ZeroLv12

Already at it 👍😂

Gartard:Try The Merchant of Death . Marvel fan fiction , i loved it .
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